As promised, every other week on my creative blog I will post the corrections to the weeks before Serial Novel Post. They are up there now so go take a look. (Or read for the first time!)
PS- I have noticed with my writing in the past that I have a tendency to put in too much exposition, especially in the beginning of my stories. (I think it helps me at the start to get everything laid out- but its not really necessary for the reader.) If you ever feel like this, or feel that there is a certain section that would be better off "seen and not told" make sure to mention it.
Be there next week for the second part!